Three Ways to Dock a Motorboat

I wrote a humorous piece last night – well I tried! – but I’m not quite sure about how well it came out. It feels a bit heavy-handed to me but my older daughter was in stitches when she read it so I posted it anyway.

I wouldn’t mind some impartial #feedback though! Especially because I’m committed to a second part (it was too long to do it one) which I’m trying to complete by Friday or Saturday.

Link here: Three Ways to Dock a Motorboat (Part I). The story is part of my Upriver series (for those of you who know what that is).

Thanks a lot to anybody who reads it and leaves feedback! 🙂